Second Critique

Once again we have had the stressful process of putting together a poster draft to be hung for our peers to observe and critique. This time around was much rougher, which was good as to help me figure out how to tweek my poster to make it more appealing to the eye. I kept much of a similar design as my first, but this time was told I needed more negative space. There's too much going on, which I can agree with although it may be tough to part with some of my drawings. Here is a picture of my second draft: